Poems

Oh I didn't read the forth one ... I like it to !

Let's agree to disagree
For in the starswept destiny
Who comes forth and who steps back
Is none but existential angst
In the wrinkled palms of whatever god awaits us
Our so called human trivials are none but grains of sand.

And yet the stars grow dimmer as the moon eclisped the sun
And the quarry it grew stronger as the night began to wane
For grief it cannot puncture what true love cannot erase
Everything is clarity, it all falls back to earth
Even the simplest gesture, your youth has evanesced.

A tempest in a teapot
A casual embrace
Forever young, to never age, the asking price is high
One soul is there in question, to trade and never die
You regret, with dearest sympathies
Sign the declaration, end the war of pain and beauty.

All this, and time continues
Chasing hands around the clock
Never stopping, never breathing
Each minute folds upon itself.
Everything is going far to fast to comprehend.

In the wrinkled palms of whatever god awaits us
Our so called human trivials are none but grains of sand.

chibichomp wrote:

AMAZING ! All three are lovley, I especialy like the word play one and the song one ! You're great !

I assume by that, you mean the first and third? Personally, I like the first the most.

@Evermore: Wow, I liked the diction in that. The rhythm broke in several places, but I liked it a lot!

counted! good job everyone!

okay this one has to do with New Moon from Bella's point of view:

You said that you had to go away
That my memories would soon erase
While I begged you to stay
You left and so began the chase

I got lost
I felt so cold
Lost in my thoughts
Of being so old

You were wrong
I needed you by my side
And while you were gone
So Was I

It was as if you had died
The feeling of death
And I cried
Missing your sweet breath

But I found a friend
By the name of Jacob Black
Was this truly our end?
Was there no turning back?

He was a werewolf
And you a vampire
But which
Do I truly desire

But then came fate
And I jumped freely off a cliff
I saw your face
And your arms became my crypt

I let go of life
And to die I was ready
I wasn't going to fight
But Jacob's arms held me steady

I went home
And Alice was there
Her body like stone
Her very spiky hair

You called my phone
To confirm if I'd died
But you learned wrong
I was still alive

To Italy I flew
Scared stiff
Looking for you
My personal myth

But you were there
By the very large clock tower
It wasn't fair
I had until the turn of the hour

Into the air I jumped
A great length
But you weren't even bumped
With all your strength

We met the Volturi
It was scary
You protected me
While you were wary

To Forks we traveled
And I slept
The mystery unraveled
Of why you left

Together again
We prevailed
Never again
Will we fail

I loved your poem bella&edward101! Very well done.

thanks wantingedward, much appreciated.

rosalie house:

here's my bad poem:


shouldn’t have gone to that birthday party,
Everything would have been fine.
I gave myself a paper cut,
Then,
Jasper threw himself at me,
Everything was a blur,
The last thing I knew,
You said good-bye.

I missed you so much,
You told me you would never see me,
But inside,
I wished it was all a lie,
October,
November,
December,
January,
Nothing,
I waited.

Alice came one day,
Hoping to comfort Charlie,
She saw me die,
She saw you killing yourself,
That was what made me cry.

We tried to get there soon,
We hoped we weren’t too late,
When I saw you,
I felt alive,
I saved you,
And you saved me,
We were together again,
For eternity.

here's another one..

rosalie house...


I finally got the hang of writing Twilight poems. Here they are:


[A SINGLE LETTER? WHY ON EARTH WOULD ANYONE USE A SINGLE LETTER TO REPLACE AN ENTIRE WORD?????????]Lion and the Lamb[/A SINGLE LETTER? WHY ON EARTH WOULD ANYONE USE A SINGLE LETTER TO REPLACE AN ENTIRE WORD?????????]

It was a rainy day when we met,
The sky seemed to be crying,
Was it happy tears?
Was it sad tears?
Your perfecton stole my heart,
Your behavior in biology scared me so.

Yet,
I was still in love,
For two weeks you did not return,
For 2 weeks I waited in vain,
The day you came back warmed my heart,
The day took a bizarre turn,
You introduced yourself,
There was something different,
And the lion fell in love with the lamb.

[A SINGLE LETTER? WHY ON EARTH WOULD ANYONE USE A SINGLE LETTER TO REPLACE AN ENTIRE WORD?????????]Goodbye Edward[/A SINGLE LETTER? WHY ON EARTH WOULD ANYONE USE A SINGLE LETTER TO REPLACE AN ENTIRE WORD?????????] (this is in twilight)

If I hadn’t been there,
Your family would be safe,
James unleashed himself as a tracker,
I fought through my tears to say goodbye,
This was all my fault,
And your family was going to pay for it.

You kissed me one last time,
You held my face in your cold hands,
Your topaz eyes burning into mine,
Then,
In a flash,
You were gone,
Gone.

Which Cullen are you?

Charisma is certainly an important part (Jasper)

Understanding the future through mind and heart (Alice)

Learning to help the human others (Carlisle)

Living with your sisters and brothers (Rosalie)

Enjoying everyone's company (Emmett)

Nurturing you family (Esme)

Showing someone else to the family tree. (Edward)

Awww ... that's cute !

thanks!

That was the cutest poem ever! Short and Sweet and well done! I loved it! yay!

thank you. i like your avatar wantingedward, it's really pretty.

bella&edward101 wrote:

okay this one has to do with New Moon from Bella's point of view:

You said that you had to go away
That my memories would soon erase
While I begged you to stay
You left and so began the chase

I got lost
I felt so cold
Lost in my thoughts
Of being so old

You were wrong
I needed you by my side
And while you were gone
So Was I

It was as if you had died
The feeling of death
And I cried
Missing your sweet breath

But I found a friend
By the name of Jacob Black
Was this truly our end?
Was there no turning back?

He was a werewolf
And you a vampire
But which
Do I truly desire

But then came fate
And I jumped freely off a cliff
I saw your face
And your arms became my crypt

I let go of life
And to die I was ready
I wasn't going to fight
But Jacob's arms held me steady

I went home
And Alice was there
Her body like stone
Her very spiky hair

You called my phone
To confirm if I'd died
But you learned wrong
I was still alive

To Italy I flew
Scared stiff
Looking for you
My personal myth

But you were there
By the very large clock tower
It wasn't fair
I had until the turn of the hour

Into the air I jumped
A great length
But you weren't even bumped
With all your strength

We met the Volturi
It was scary
You protected me
While you were wary

To Forks we traveled
And I slept
The mystery unraveled
Of why you left

Together again
We prevailed
Never again
Will we fail

very excellent awsome job!

bella&edward101 wrote:

Which Cullen are you?

Charisma is certainly an important part (Jasper)

Understanding the future through mind and heart (Alice)

Learning to help the human others (Carlisle)

Living with your sisters and brothers (Rosalie)

Enjoying everyone's company (Emmett)

Nurturing you family (Esme)

Showing someone else to the family tree. (Edward)

that one was good too very cute

thanks MissMack123.all of you guys are so kind.

ur welcome ur so nice

This poem is kind of how Bella felt towards Edward at the beginning of Twilight and sometimes afterward:

Are we together?
Or are we apart?
Do you love me?
Do I have your heart?
Do you look at me,
Like I look at you?
Are your intentions
Really true?
If I left
Would you be scarred?
If you left
Would it be hard?
Will you always
Be my favorite mystery?
Or is our relationship
Just simply history?
If I was afraid
Would you be there?
Or am I wrong?
Would you even care?
I must know,
Is it true?
Do you love me,
As I love you?
These are the questions,
That I feel I must ask.
But figuring you out,
Is an even harder task.

oh my god ! that was amazing !

i'm glad you liked it. the idea sort of came to me by accident. :)

Omc! You are a poetic genius bella&edward101! And I thought my new avatar was really pretty too, thanks. Doesn't the butterfly look as if made of the most delicate of lace?

Although some of the rhymes seemed forced, that was a very good poem, B&E. And I liked the CULLENS one, also. It was pretty imaginative. I tried one of them once (I can't remember their names, when you make a list where the first letter of each line spells a word) for English. I had to write one for each letter in my name that described me. Bless my short name... Anyways, even with only four characters, I had trouble. In the end I decided to go for a subtle make-fun-of-myself by over applying angst.

Livid

I am evil

Angry

Malicious



Funniest part is, the teacher though I was serious, and reccomended therapy.



P.S., it is a very pretty avatar, wantingedward. I really like how the buttefly blends in really well. When you first said butterfly, I thought, "What butterfly?"

For Carlisle House. EPOV of Bella, you know, just how he has to keep restarting on the understanding that Bella is his. Even if every other male wishes she were theirs.
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All it takes is one simple glance
To send my dead heart a-flutter

A beatiful angel, a goddess
I love her...I love her

No one in heaven or here on earth could ever compare
Every man can do all but stare

As my glorious Bella passes by
I see the look in her eyes, staring back at me

And I again just begin to grasp, to realise this unearthly woman is mine

My eyes widen, understanding hit...

Mine...all mine...

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Hmm...yes, this isn't very good...but I wanted to add another poem anyway. And yes, the fact that it blends in was part of what took me to get it in the first place...I love that for some odd reason. Lol. I'm weird like that I suppose. And I just can't get over how it looks like it is made of lace! I ADORE IT!

the butterfly is very pretty and it ties in beautifully with the yellow of the rose. it looks so delicate. i loved your poem wantingedward. it just flowed so nicely. thanks everyone for your critique.