Isabella_Swan105
Number of posts : 18
Age : 30
Location : Dreaming of my true love Edward
Registration date : 2007-09-03
 |  Subject: ~Poems~  Sat Jan 12, 2008 7:46 pm | |
| This is just a short poem I wrote based off of New Moon. I wrote it in just a few minute so I don't think it's that great.....Your voice sounds in my mind
And though you never there
I always look for a sign
I nead you near me
I need you here
Why can't you see
I'm broken and bleeding
And you still do not return
Your memory is receding
And I fear I may forget you
Why can't you just appear out of nowhere
Like you always do?...... Please tell me what you think.  | |
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Isabella_Swan105
Number of posts : 18
Age : 30
Location : Dreaming of my true love Edward
Registration date : 2007-09-03
| | Subject: Re: ~Poems~ Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:14 am | |
| Here's another one!
Envyed by gods
and feared by mortals
So isn't it odd
for me to love you
You may thirst for my blood most
but you love me too much
You wouldn't come close
to harming me.
You always wish to say goodbye
and you say this means you love me more
though I don't mean to cry
I love you too much to let you leave
I love you
Don't leave me
Edward, I love you, I truely do
so promise you'll stay | |
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totallywicked00
Number of posts : 117
Age : 33
Location : KC, MO
House : Watching as much Project Runway as possible...GO CHRISTIAN!
Registration date : 2008-01-08
| | Subject: Re: ~Poems~ Sun Jan 20, 2008 2:39 am | |
| I really liked your first one! I'm reading New Moon again right now, so it like really hit me. Good job! | |
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Isabella_Swan105
Number of posts : 18
Age : 30
Location : Dreaming of my true love Edward
Registration date : 2007-09-03
| | Subject: Re: ~Poems~ Wed Mar 05, 2008 11:49 pm | |
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