a poem about when edward leaves bella

You Promised

My heart slowed when you left
I couldn't breathe or see where I was going
I was dizzy and the song you wrote for me
played in my head.
I spun around until I was on the floor
hurt and speachless—
You promised. It wasn't your fault I got hurt.
Please don't leave me
I can't stand now
I cry these tears
not of joy, a heartburst of pain

It's like that every time I hear your name.
Don't leave me. Don't go.
I'm tormented and burning
My life is empty without you
I can't think, can't feel
this is too real
Please don't go, you promised

I can't stand here alone
for my life you are my soul
You leave and I die
I feel the burning inside
just one more thing to say:
You promised, so just stay.

i like that its really good.

Wow. I loved it. So deep.

Wow. I loved it. So deep.