EdwardsGirl
Number of posts : 10 Age : 34 Location : Alabama...proclaiming GOD LOVES YOU! Registration date : 2007-02-15
| Subject: EdwardsGirl's Poetry! (Carlisle House Rules) Mon Feb 26, 2007 11:03 pm | |
| Not a great poet...but hey! I do what I can! hehe Untitled Wind blowing Adreneline pumping The ocean calling My name... I hear your voice As soft as velvet Begging me To stay... I want to believe You want me again But I know that it cant Be true... So now I let go Of all of my hope My dreams now gone in The blue... Yes...it stinks. I wrote it in 3 minutes..hehe! I know that was not what Bella was actually thinking, but I thought I would give it a little twist! | |
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CamiCullen129
Number of posts : 33 Location : somewhere over the rainbow!!! (Florida, USA) Registration date : 2007-02-22
| Subject: Re: EdwardsGirl's Poetry! (Carlisle House Rules) Mon Feb 26, 2007 11:33 pm | |
| I love it!!!!!!!! great job, Edwardsgirl!!! | |
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CamCullen
Number of posts : 92 Age : 31 Location : Wishing with Edward Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: EdwardsGirl's Poetry! (Carlisle House Rules) Tue Feb 27, 2007 1:06 am | |
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Fangs-OX
Number of posts : 36 Age : 34 Location : The hospital with Carlisle Registration date : 2007-02-13
| Subject: Re: EdwardsGirl's Poetry! (Carlisle House Rules) Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:25 am | |
| I love it!! It's a really nice poem! Keep it up I'm expecting more! | |
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EdwardsGirl
Number of posts : 10 Age : 34 Location : Alabama...proclaiming GOD LOVES YOU! Registration date : 2007-02-15
| Subject: Re: EdwardsGirl's Poetry! (Carlisle House Rules) Tue Feb 27, 2007 8:06 pm | |
| Thanks much guys...I write alot of poems but they are mostly religious. So unless you want me to bust out with my Christian poems...I have to make these up as I go...hehe! Anyways...my creative blood isnt flowing right now but I will work on it and may post a new one later tonight! | |
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