Ellie's poems (updated 12/06/08)

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The first time I ever loved life was when I saw the world in your eyes.
But when I saw the way you looked at him it caught me by surprise.
I long to touch you in a way I never will.
And each day the pain of losing hope is growing greater still.

Just don't. I love you and there's nothing you can do.
So don't stand in my way as I self-destruct and continue to act like a fool.
You own me, you owe me, I can't find the way.
You wronged me, belong to me, there's nothing to say.
I'm gone.


Reqiescat In Pace

For those who, in our hearts, we hold dear
For those who no longer hover so near
The ones that have gone to prepare our way
The ones that still hear us each night when we pray
Lord, let us not grieve for the ones gone above
Only hold in our hearts all our memories and love
And pass the sweet time on the earth while we can
Until we are called home, reunited again
Reqiescat in Pace

its good

That's awesome! It would make a good song(:

Awww thanks. I've thought about putting into music but I only play keyboard/piano and it's a little too hardcore of a subject to do on piano.

Maybe...have you tried yet? I like it

Haven't tried yet, and I'm not home at the moment. But I'm really considering it, if you guys think it's any good. I should put up the rest of my stuff here (my non-spur-of-moment stuff that is)

Ohmygoodness, it's amazing Ellie! ^.^

Thanks, Lighty. Most of the feelings from that time are gone, so I'm kind of struggling to write now. I wanted to put up more, but I don't know how to approach my new emotions appropriately.

OOOOhhh I can see now why they put the RIP poem on the headstone.
You're so talented!!

Thanks so much :)
My family talks about how talented I am, I just write what I feel is appropriate at the time. If it appeals to people, so be it.
But thanks very much for the compliment.